AUTHOR’S NOTE: Hi, y’all! Okay, I apologise if the posts are becoming way too soppy and similar for you! There’s a kind of (please take note of it when I say ‘kind of’) funny post coming up next! Love y’all for reading and comments are always appreciated (indirectly begging you for your feed back) 😀 x
“Whilst you said
You were off
Chasing my demons,
Little did I know,
You were chasing
Them onto me.”
Life before you was simple. I was happy dreaming of dreamy utopias with me as their reigning queen. I had the stars within my grasp and I could paint with colours non-existent. I used to marvel at them. They spoke words to me and I spoke back to them through my loving strokes. The world was my canvas interminatis.
But you rudely barged in. You were a gatecrasher in my party at first. Oh, and how quickly I learnt that you were the life of it.
Darling, you shattered the precarious foundation of my pretentious but joyful world. Never had I felt so naked, cold and vulnerable, but you were the fire toasting me.
However, what they say is true. Old habits die hard. I was still an inkling of my older self. Still off chasing after fairies and imps. I wanted my fairy tale.
Knowing me as you did, you built me up on my fantasies. I believed you. Your kisses told me I was privileged. Your loving gestures were those befitting royalty. Your pretty lies rendered masterpieces in my mind worth residing at the Louvre.
Yes, I admit I was stupid. That hurt, you know, knowing that you were the one making me feel that way. The man who once made me feel like the Queen of the world, his world, now looks down at me from his throne. A satisfied smirk on his face.
Story of every other girl, eh?
But that’s what hurt the most, sweetheart.
You made me feel like every other girl in the world.
I liked your blog! 🙂
Keep writing and keep spreading love! 😀
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Thank you so much for stopping by! It means a lot 🙂
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Damn girl! That ending hits hard
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Baby! :* Waiting for your first post too! x
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Yes, the ending was the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you so much, Sheetal 🙂
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Writers challenge:
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Thanks for letting me know about it! 🙂
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This was such an emotional piece — very well written.
Kind Regards,
-Naima
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Thank you so much, Naima! Your kind words mean a lot 🙂
-Kimaya
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Beautifully designed n written,K! Keep writing and expressing your thoughts!
-S
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Thanks, S! 🙂 And your name is really cute 😀
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Well you need to thank my family for it!😃😃😃
-S
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Tee hee, yes 😉
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Writing from the heart gets no better than dat. Guy doesn’t deserve to sit on the throne if he made a girl feel like that. Keep writing, that was wonderful.
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Thank you so much! Your kind words mean a lot! 🙂
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OMG!! I’m having a great time going through your posts and damn those endings, your are gifted buddy!!Loved your blog and I mean it!!
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Oh My God! These were the words when I ended up reading it. I mean, really wow, I had never thought that “The boy made me feel like every other girl.”!!!!!!!!!
Seriously, hats off yaar. I love it.
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Thanks, yaar 😉 Your kind words mean a lot. ❤
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Reblogged this on Desire To Express and commented:
Which girl ever wants to feel like every other girl????? Come on boys, mend your ways!!!
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OH MY GOD. You are so sweet. Thanks for re-blogging my work. Thanks a million, Sheetal. ❤
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You deserved a re-blog 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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that was really very touching……….
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